This sad story was very good. If you don't mind, I would be happy if you could add Japanese or improve it so that all lines can be advanced by pressing a button.
nice storytelling, with an ending that definitely hits! Also, the fact that you programmed the game by yourself at 16 years of age bodes well for the games that you will make in the future!
another amazing game from you. the ending was bitter sweet and beautiful! another 10/10 in my book! can't wait to play your newest one next!!! *max noises*
This game made me cry, man. I've played in 3/4 your games and now i'm ready to say that i'm your big fan!! This game were without screamers at all, but.. Lore of this game is beautiful I really thought that crow killer would be one of our friends, but when i saw Kevin i was just shocked I really love every your game and i hope somewhen i would make something like you did<3
I finally played all four of your short horror games! I was surprised by how good the quality was in them while still being free to play. The story was really deep too. I can't wait to play your next installments!
Amazing! Very nice game, I have played other masterpieces of this video game developer and they always amazed me! I hope he continues on his video game path because he has full approval from me!
i loved this game.. the ending made me cry so much. I never comment for any game i play but WOW... this game deserves it, BEST horror game i´ve played in my whole life, no joke.
The atmosphere you’ve created is deeply unsettling, and the voice acting really brings the story to life. The buildup of tension as I pieced together the mystery of the Crow Killer was thrilling. Great job on blending investigative gameplay with horror—definitely a memorable experience!
This was a super cool game, loved the concept, the atmosphere, voice acting and minigames you had to play throughout. Please check this video out if you can, and I hope to see more from this game creator, I feel they are going in a really good direction
Man, I knew the Caretaker vibe when I heard it! The aesthetic is there, the story is interesting, and while I agree that there were some issue with the pacing, I truly enjoyed my time playing this game! Keep up the good work!
Very fun story fella! If I had to criticize anything, it would be that some of the walking segments took a bit too long, albeit I know the intention was to build up, well, tension lol
Was a bit surprised at the characters that showed up at the very end, a tad funny, but I enjoyed it. Good work, and good voice actors as well
We reviewed your game and posted our results today!
From our reviewer: "Is The Final Pin worth your time? The answer is yes if you have about 1-2 hours to spare. The Final Pin has a lot of style and an intriguing narrative. If you want a film noir-themed whodunit story where you do not need to solve the crime, just experience the atmosphere and the world such a tale has to offer, this game is worth checking out."
I understand my review is late to the party, but I really want to offer constructive criticism. I genuinely love your art style, but I feel like the pacing mechanics and interactions are better suited for games that are 5-30 minutes that need padding, either to help with suspense (doing the same thing only for it to be different like the third or fourth time) or to literally just give the player something to do. This game started out strong, but by the hour mark I was already so tired from driving back to the house, walking through the doors, holding e on things more than once. The pacing was just so slow, it lost me after the third or fourth case, but I stuck with it after I realized how much time I had invested in it already. I also really don't think you needed to have the interrogation scene at the end to recap the story, I thought you did a great job with how the scene with Kevin had already played out.
I'm sorry, I really don't want to be mean and I appreciate your work and effort so much, I just hope you take some of these things into consideration if you decide to make a lengthier game again because this had so much potential <3
This was super helpful! Im currently working on my latest game and comments like this really help me keep an eye out for issues like that while im working on the next project.
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awesome game me encanto!!!
I loved this game! Great story with a twist that leaves you wishing you could watch it as a movie. Until then, this is as close as we could get:
This game was pretty interesting and it is clear that it was made with care and love. Great atmosphere. Overall a great game.
nice storytelling, with an ending that definitely hits! Also, the fact that you programmed the game by yourself at 16 years of age bodes well for the games that you will make in the future!
p.s. the quote of Minmo cat food <3
Here is my blind playthrough of The Final Pin and Ignited Entry I enjoyed all of your games hope you make more in the future :
We need Chinese pls！！！！！
I totally forgot to send you this ! This is my playthrough of your game! :) Hope you like the result! (The subtitles might work in english ;))
Man i hate having a mac... I wish i could play it
another amazing game from you. the ending was bitter sweet and beautiful! another 10/10 in my book! can't wait to play your newest one next!!! *max noises*
such a great story damn like its so emotional, you're really skilled man, love your work!
its amazing game keep going
This game made me cry, man.
I've played in 3/4 your games and now i'm ready to say that i'm your big fan!!
This game were without screamers at all, but..
Lore of this game is beautiful
I really thought that crow killer would be one of our friends, but when i saw Kevin i was just shocked
I really love every your game and i hope somewhen i would make something like you did<3
f*cking awesome.
Great job man,you made me cry
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i loved this game.. the ending made me cry so much. I never comment for any game i play but WOW... this game deserves it, BEST horror game i´ve played in my whole life, no joke.
Very nice game! Thanks a lot :)
French gameplay here:
This was another fun game to play. I've had it on ly list for awhile now. I'm glad I played it. 5 Stars!!
JORDAN...ONE DAY I WILL VOICE ACT IN ONE OF YOUR GAMES I PROMISE YOU,LOL...AMAZING INSTALLMENT AS ALWAYS BRO
MAYBEEE 👀 post this video in the Ignited Entry comments!! More oeople gotta see this video!!
bro..lol i was moving on little time earlier, i thought i did my fault
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I really enjoy it! it was so good great Job!
my fav indie horror game...
Man, I knew the Caretaker vibe when I heard it! The aesthetic is there, the story is interesting, and while I agree that there were some issue with the pacing, I truly enjoyed my time playing this game! Keep up the good work!
Very fun story fella! If I had to criticize anything, it would be that some of the walking segments took a bit too long, albeit I know the intention was to build up, well, tension lol
Was a bit surprised at the characters that showed up at the very end, a tad funny, but I enjoyed it. Good work, and good voice actors as well
there go berlin in the game.
The Final Pin Actually Got me Scared
Man, this game was good! I had fun playing through it in my last stream:
Fun twists there at the end. Can't wait to see what you come up next! Take care!
We reviewed your game and posted our results today!
From our reviewer: "Is The Final Pin worth your time? The answer is yes if you have about 1-2 hours to spare. The Final Pin has a lot of style and an intriguing narrative. If you want a film noir-themed whodunit story where you do not need to solve the crime, just experience the atmosphere and the world such a tale has to offer, this game is worth checking out."
Rating: 4 out of 5
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I understand my review is late to the party, but I really want to offer constructive criticism. I genuinely love your art style, but I feel like the pacing mechanics and interactions are better suited for games that are 5-30 minutes that need padding, either to help with suspense (doing the same thing only for it to be different like the third or fourth time) or to literally just give the player something to do. This game started out strong, but by the hour mark I was already so tired from driving back to the house, walking through the doors, holding e on things more than once. The pacing was just so slow, it lost me after the third or fourth case, but I stuck with it after I realized how much time I had invested in it already. I also really don't think you needed to have the interrogation scene at the end to recap the story, I thought you did a great job with how the scene with Kevin had already played out.
I'm sorry, I really don't want to be mean and I appreciate your work and effort so much, I just hope you take some of these things into consideration if you decide to make a lengthier game again because this had so much potential <3
This was super helpful! Im currently working on my latest game and comments like this really help me keep an eye out for issues like that while im working on the next project.
Thank you so much for this comment!
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Story: 9/10
Creepy: 7/10
Visual: 8/10
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