英検二級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 TOPIC These days, some people don't have a television at home. Do you think the number of such people will increase in the future? POINTS • Information source • Entertainment • Time with family I don't think the number of such people will increase in future. I have three reasons. First, a terevision is more exact than other infarmation sourse. So, we can get information If even me face to earthquake and so on. Second, television is able to watch it with other people. for instance, enjoy the mate with Family, To we can use it when we spend time with family . Con these reasons, I don't think wore such people will increase in future.
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