次の英作文を、中学生レベルの文にしたいのですが、どこを変えるとそう見えますか？変える箇所だけ教えていただければよろしいので、全文書く必要はありません。 The thing I’m most passionate about is dancing. I started dance classes because I have asthma and couldn’t do other sports. I tried jazz dance but realized it wasn’t for me after my first recital. Inspired by my brother’s hip-hop music, I joined a hip-hop dance group. At first, I struggled and lost confidence, but my mom’s words, “If you don’t have confidence, you won’t achieve anything,” pushed me to keep going. The final recital was amazing, and I realized dancing is my true passion. Now, I dance with friends, expressing myself, and I’ll keep dancing with all my heart.
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