英検準1級 要約問題について質問です。 素点が何点ぐらいか判断していただきたいです。 前回は12/16だったので点数が伸びれば嬉しいです。 問題 should people be banned from keeping Second, Some dangerous animals difficult keeping as pets. 使用したPoints ・animal welfare・endangered species 以下が回答です。 Different people should be banned from keeping Second, Some dangerous animals difficult keeping as pets. Personally, I agree with this opinion that people should be banned from keeping dangerous animals as pets, for the following two reasons. First, Some dangerous animals are endangered species.By keeping dangerous animals as pets at homes, dangerous animals will have sicks.This is because, when dangerous animals keeping in small spaces, dangerous animals have stress so dangerous animals will have sicks.As a result, endangered specie are decrease in the world. Second, Some dangerous animals difficult keeping. Some people no have knowledge about people keeping dangerous animals.Government should make laws that people improve animal welfare.animal welfare are very important for the world. In conclusion, for these two reasons, regarding endangered species and animal welfare, I agree that people should be banned from keeping dangerous animals as pets.
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