英語
英作文の添削をお願いしたいです。語彙、文法、構成、内容など厳しくお願いします。 題「With the rise of Artificial Intelligence, jobs performed by humans will become obsolete in the near future」 With the rise of Artificial Intelligence, jobs performed by humans will become obsolete in the near future for the following two reasons. First, AI can learn a job much faster than humans. It would be more efficient to outsource tasks that should be done by humans to AI, which is a fast learner, rather than taking a long time to teach humans what to do. Second, there is no need to pay wages to AI. Money that would have originally been paid to human workers can be used to improve facilities and invest in other areas. In conclusion, for the betterment of time and money reasons, Jobs done by humans will become obsolete as AI develops.
